作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;能够使用一些不错的从句。
The campus environment is important of undergraduate so that it is necessary to create a green campus,it is advantage for everyone,so,many colleges have been creating a green campus.However,not only that refers to creating green building but also academic environment.In order to undergraduate can enjoy better environment,they try them best to create green campus environment. In my view,for the sake of creating a green campus,that isn't one person can complete,it is need everyone's efforts,academician,professor,even whole society.We are learning from campus everyday.At first we should keep it clean,the second,as a undergraduate,we should do what he do and establish a good learning atmosphere.Finally,through everyone's mutual competition. For creating a green campus,we will try our best to do it.