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With the development of technology, the Internet has played a more and more important role in your life. The Internet has become a vital way for people to make friends. But is it wise to make friends online? Qpinions on this issue difer sharply. Weighing the pros and cons, I think, the benefits of making friends online outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, it is more easier to make friends online. For us, being in a new place and lacking a sense of security, we may spend more time to try to know about strangers. But the chatting tools, we can talk with strangers and make friends with them more easily. Secondly, it's a good way for us to get to know more people who have the common interests. In our daily life, we just make new friends with the people around us such as classmates and schoolmates. With the limitation of places, actually, we can't find many good friends having the common interests. But the internet offers us an effective way to know about new friends from different places. Finally,through the online friends, we can broaden our horizons about different cultures of other places. Online friends from different places and cultural background can make us understand their cultures. And when we chat with them, we can also learn the skills how to talk with others. In summary, making friends online has many benefits. It is wise for us to make friiends online.
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