文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;能够使用一些不错的从句。
In our daily life,we always judge somebody by what we saw ,we heard,in fact,it is not wise. because it's not always the reality people. we don't know the backgrounds, the motivated ,we don't know what happened on this guy,what environment the guy in either. for example,we saw one person steals some food in supermarket ,we think he is a thief,we hate him and even ask police to catch him.maybe the fact is he is suffered from earthquake, has three children and they haven't eaten anything for three days.this is the first time he steals things.
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