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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11761
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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