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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11761
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。

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Therefore, the thesis wills creative thinking from Beloved’s spiritual identities, studying the influence of Beloved to Sethe and Denver in mind, which provides a new thought for readers understanding the history of black people. Toni Morrison has a strong sense of national consciousness; she is committing to improve the material life of black people and their social status. Meanwhile, she focuses on the future of the nation; she hopes the black can get enlightening significance from the past and the present, not to be forgetting history.

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