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Beloved is the epitome of the whole black nation. The thesis reveals the cruel of slavery and brings enormous harm to the black; these harms have hampered their search for personal value and personal identification. Under the slavery, the black slave's language power is in full control of the slave owner. Meanwhile, it also implied history cannot forget and unity is the only way to black people.
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