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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11760
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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One of the keys of the story is the multiple identities of Beloved. In the title page, Toni Morrison stated “sixty million and more.” This significant number of dead African American people reveals the savage crime of slavery system. Furthermore, this figure also imply that Beloved is one particular case for black people. Therefore, the identity of beloved is not about one single character. There are so many possible identities for beloved regarding to how people interpret. She maybe is the daughter who killed by Sethe or a survivor from the trade of slavery. No matter who she is Toni Morrison has left some evidence in the novel.

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