Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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what we can know from the sentence above is that diffent job have diffent occation.I think doctor is a good job.Because it is high salary job and face to unemployment is not ease.the most important is that they can give other help and health.Therefore,we very like the job and i hope i will become a docter.