文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
Why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance For most of people,judging person by their appearance seems to be a common behaviour.They look at people' dresses,outlooks even talks to judge their thoughts and characters,so that knowing a person.Seemly,it is right,because from some degrees,it is pretty sensable even I think of that. In fact,it is not right to judge a person by their appearance,thus it maybe make some errors. From their appearance,we can conclude that I could get on well with this person or not,as well as I do.But some day I find it wrong.I remember some day,I walked along that street.Suddenly,I find my cellphone no charged but need to it to call someone in help.Deeply I am in brains, I threw my tears out eyes and crazy;I was in despair,how person can help me or did there are peple who can help me ?someone in uncleam clothes help me call and give my suggestions.It amaze me because he looked not good and dirty. From then on ,I decided to look peple not only appearances and their souls.I decided to look people from their souls.
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