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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7191
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, more and more people are inclined to live in the metropolitan because of better education and convenient transportation. However, there are also problems associated with prosperous of the city, which decrease the life quality. This paper mainly discusses the reasons and solutions for the phenomenon. First of all, the heavy traffic in the city not only costs people more time but also causes environment issues, like air pollution and acid rain. And the fierce competition in the metropolitan causes pressure and anxiety, which make the public to worry more about tomorrow instead of enjoying the life. The higher price of goods makes the situation even worse because individuals have to work hard to earn a living. In my opinion, some measures should be taken to solve the problem. To start with, better road plan for the transportation is required, and the emission of vehicles needs to be limited by legislation. Then a good warfare system ought to be developed to ensure the basic health care and education are available for the public. Finally, government should control the price of goods in an acceptable range. In conclusion, the life in big cities is not perfect, but with the effort of the public and government, it will be better.

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