2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误。

As the development of technology,computer become more and more necessary for the world.It seems that some people may not live without it.However,computer take many advantages for us and we also use it everywhere.Such as surfing,teaching,writing and learning.It would say that the computer which invent by people is a great progress for the humans.But it also cause many problems,especially for children.Because they are so young that can't judge the things correctly. So,keep a proper distance with it maybe is a good choice.