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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
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文章层次较为清晰;词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,文中有些单词拼错了;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

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As an old saying goes:ears and eyes can treat us.It means we should not judge one thing just by a first sight or expression. TO get the enssential of obiects,we need notice several points as following.To be start with,we have to enrich ourshelves.we can do it better and accurate under enormous knowledge.Then,watching is very important.A focusing eye must be put on the person or something you hear or see.There are amounts of little items to be found by you cautious.The last but not least,knowing others or some uncertain news owes a period of long time.It's only we spend as much as time on it can we really know it. In a word,it's a little superficial that make dicisions on somebody or something just by a not second thought.we could live more relax if we are willing to know it with more thinkings.

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