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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;采用了一些简单的从句;作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,there exists an increasing serious social problem that some people judge a person bu their appearance.Is it ture?there is no doubt that it is wrong. there are a couple of reasons booming this progrem.firstly,appearance is given by our parents,we can do nothing toly change but we can enhance ourself by hardly study.for exemple,steven hawking is high disabled,but he still comes to great achievements.secondly.if we judge a peason by their appearance,we will miss considarable people those who are strongly capable,which don't have a good appearance.finally,appearance is something,ability is everything. consequently,we are not supposed to concentrte on one's appearance,on contrast,we are expected to pain more attention to one's ability,only in this way,our socialty will become better.

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