2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中衔接词丰富；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

As we can see in the picuter,everyone is using their phone,it seems like they can't live without phone.Many people use phone mainly because it convient. There is no deny that phone brings us great convience and pleasure,however,we gradually find phone is damaging our life in some degrees. Many people use phone in unhealthy way,they are hooked on phone.They spend countless time on phone for chating,for shopping and so on,not for study and work.Using phone too much can do great harm to their body,they may be overweight more easily,their eyesight may decrease heavily and so on. Many people ingore their family and friends,they use phone to find pleasure but they will feel lonely and empty after playing phone for many hours. We should use phone wisely, be the master of phone not slave.