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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint5 单元测试写作:有烦恼向谁说?

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:03浏览次数:4642
要求:
提示:假如你叫王平,参加了学校的”有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey)。


调查结果:

1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
3、少数自己独立解决(理由:不愿与人交流,难以与人相处)


请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。


Dear Editor,

I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Ping
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Dear Editor, I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey –”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results. Most students will go to their classmates or friends when they have trouble because they are almost the same age. They can talk with and understand each other easily. Some will tell their teachers or parents about their problems as they have rich experience and they are helpful. Only a few solve their problems by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with other people, either. They have few friends. I think we’d better ask our teachers, parents, classmates, and friends for help when we are in trouble. Since I go to school, I have to do the morning exercise from Monday to Friday. When the familiar music plays, my body will shake unexpectly. The school morning exercise has become part of my life, I will never forget about these action. Recently, it has been reported that some schools have make some changes in the morning exercise. They teach the students the new style exercise with the popular music. A video has been played on the Internet and people like it so much. I think it is a good change, the students are full of passion and they enjoy it. Doing the morning exercise is not longer a boring task. Yours Sincerely, Wang Ping

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