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经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
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We are usually angry with our parents. Becaus of they are very concerned about our marks. We can do our things very well, and do some wrong things, so our parents are always angry with us. We should talk with our parents, or do some housework that our parents maybe happy than before. We should do some true things so that, our parents won't be angry with you. So we should learn to get along with our parents.