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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4566
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但有个别拼写错误;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。

用户练习作文:

It should come as no surprised to learn that individuals in mushrooming number are convert their conventional ways for comunication to a cyber original one by applying electronic and technological devices. According to a statistics, the amount of netizens who using chatting applications for routine association are accounting for 54.38% minimally of whole population of China. Nevertheless, by means of cyber tools to comunicate with others may give rise to many impacts. Initially, the positive effects of comunicating online expand the range of the areas, enabling inhabitants in disperate regions and culture to encounter in which the traditional method, namely, face to face, are not likely to relize. Rather, every coin have two sides. netizens, especially the adolescents, are inclined to neglect the friends and families, instead, they just center on their own phone or computer.

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