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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章衔接手法恰当;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

There is an usual phenomenon that many people prefer to judge a person by their appearance. It is unwise to so. The reasons can be listed as follows. To begin with, appearance doesn’t present a person’s ability. There is no direct connection between appearance and ability. Then a person’s appearance may just indicate it’s one aspect. It’s not mature enough to get a hasty decision about the person. The third one is that some successive men have an ordinary look as well. What should we do is that we are expected to learn every aspect of a person. In addition,we ought to talk to the person more,then we are able to know the person more wisely. It’s high time that we do not judge a person by their appearance. Only in this way can we know a person what he really looks like and make more friends who are truly we want.

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