2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

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I am very happy that i can have a good hoilday.And i have a great plan about this hoilday.I am going to learn a thing.It is a a thing that i like.And i am going to learn them very well.Becase it will be very important to my future.Only this,no,i want to do others,too.Such as,play the computer games;do some sports...... Buy the way,i hope you can go to China.