可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;采用了一些简单的从句。
I am delighted to learn that my foreign friend ,Bill, is going to take vacation in my hometown.For the sake of his hospitality I enjoyed in England, I will you show him arround the landspace.Mout Tai is unquestionably on the top in my list. Centuries ago. Confucious exclaimed that the world was small.In the modern times,everyone is bound to appreciate its auspusiours and sacrdness,where many Chinese emperor came here to make