简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
Nowadays,with the social competitions becoming increasingly intensive,we have to be a knowledgeable person for standing out in the life.However,boooks are various and colorful.It means that we have many choices to read.How should we choose? Should we read selectively or extensively? Someone holds the view that we shoud read in the selective way while others insist on reading extnesively.In fact,they have their own advantages.The way reading selectively can make us more professional on one area and we can study something difficult deeperly.But extensive reading allows us to acqurie all kinds of knowledges without limitation. Therefore,I think there are different advantages in two learning ways.And what we can do just chooses one method to major in it.Only in this way,we can gain something.Or it is better for us to balance two ways.