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1999年6月英语四级作文真题:读书要有选择还是博览群书

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:35浏览次数:7015
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Reading selectively or extensively? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.有人认为读书要有选择
  2.有人认为应当博览群书
  3.我的看法
用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,with the social competitions becoming increasingly intensive,we have to be a knowledgeable person for standing out in the life.However,boooks are various and colorful.It means that we have many choices to read.How should we choose? Should we read selectively or extensively? Someone holds the view that we shoud read in the selective way while others insist on reading extnesively.In fact,they have their own advantages.The way reading selectively can make us more professional on one area and we can study something difficult deeperly.But extensive reading allows us to acqurie all kinds of knowledges without limitation. Therefore,I think there are different advantages in two learning ways.And what we can do just chooses one method to major in it.Only in this way,we can gain something.Or it is better for us to balance two ways.

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