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2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:24浏览次数:3563
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题目 Creating a Green Campus
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1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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The campus environment is important of undergraduate so that it is necessary to create a green campus,it is advantage for everyone,so,many colleges have been creating a green campus.However,not only that refers to creating green building but also academic environment.In order to enjoy better environment of undergraduate in campus,they try them best to create environment of green campus . In my view,for the sake of creating a green campus,that isn't one person can complete,it is needed everyone's efforts,academician,professor,even whole society.We are learning from campus every day.At first we should keep campus clean.The second,as an undergraduate,we should do what should do,establish a good learning atmosphere.Finally,through everyone's mutual competition. For creating a green campus better,we always try our best to do it.

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