简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;作者词汇量积累需要继续努力,尤其高级词汇还有很大提升空间,另外拼写检查还需加强。
Nowadays,with the social competitions becoming increasingly intense,we have to be a knowledgeable person for standing out in the life.However,books are various and colorful.It means that we have many choices to read and broaden our horizens.How should we choose? Should we read selectively or extensively? Someone holds the view that we shoud read in the selective way while others insist on reading extensively.In fact,everthing consists of the advantages and shortages.The way reading selectively can make us more professional on one area and we can study something difficult deeperly.In the mean time, extensive reading allows us to acqurie all kinds of knowledges without limitation. Therefore,I think that whatever we choose,we will benefit a lot.Now what we can do just chooses one method to major in it.But if you are outstanding enough,it is better for you to balance two ways.