2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

I am very happy that you will visit my hometown.In there,you will see another cusumer.I am pleasual that I have an opportunity as a guld. In frist day,we will clumb the frist mountain of my hometown which have very beautiful.when we are in the top of mountain,we will view my all hometown.In next day,we will go to the one dollor shop where is very cheap that we found we need.In third day,we will play in the pack which have many fun games. if you have more time,I will arrange other.