2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

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Long times ago, my mom said to me,the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it, which made me have deep impression. I think my mom is right,we have a lot of time in our life, we do a lot of things. But which thing will make our life more meaningful. As a collage student, I remade it so I do many meaningful things. I visit eldest people as volunteer and teach children as a tutor. What's more, I take part in many activities,i feel my life is meaningful.