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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者在句法层面做的很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

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The genius I admire most is Deng Ya Ping. Her stature is very small, just in table tennis team is not optimistic, even will defeat the national team. But she has a kind of indomitable spirit of the very people forced their hard training, the day in and day out to make their own table tennis level has been great promotion, also won the national team coach recognition. But she is not so big with pride, instead she is with their own efforts for the country in the game won a championship, it was known as the "Asian giant". After retirement, a thought when she with the national capital spending his life safely, she came to a magnificent turn, study abroad, and became the general manager of the immediate search. Her persistent effort let me admire.

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