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The genius I admire most is Deng Ya Ping. Her stature is very small, just in table tennis team is not optimistic, even will defeat the national team. But she has a kind of an indomitable spirit of the very people forced their hard training, the day in and day out to make their own table tennis level has been great promotion, also won the national team coach recognition. But she is not so big with pride, instead she is with their own efforts for the country in the game won a championship, it was known as the "Asian giant". After retirement, some people thought that she would spend the national capital with his life safely. On the country, she came to a magnificent turn, study abroad, and became the general manager of the immediate search. Her persistent effort let me admire.
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