高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

My favourite sport is football.I fell in love with it by chance.One day,I found a football lying on the street.I played it with my friends and after that,I fell in love with playing football.I always play football with my classmates and join in some competes.My favourite football star is a man called Beckham from british.I dream to be a professional football player one day.