高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

My favourite sport is football. I fell in love with it by chance.One day,I found a football lying on the street. I played it with my friends and after that, I fell in love with playing football. I always play football with my classmates and join in some competes. My favourite football star is a man called Beckham from british. I dream to be a professional football player one day.