文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用。
Listening is more important than talking Everyone likes listening and talking to each other. To listen other people what to say and talk to anyone to express your feeling and story. But listening is more important than talking. On the one hand, through listening, you can clearly know that people's heart and feeling that will make them believe you are a kind and good at listening girl or boy. On the other hand, forming listening can increase your inner beauty and close between you and your friends'relationship. In my opinion, I can't disagree the statement that listening is more important than talking. I love listening to other people's talking silently. If someone sad or cry, I will accompany her and listen to her without a word. I think at that time, he or she may be more need me to listen rather then speak some comfortable words to he or her. Anyway, listening is not only a skill but also a good way to close your relationship between each other. So, I think listening is more important than talking.