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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写，高级词汇的希望能更熟练一些
From my poin to view, advertising could affet people'choice when they buy something. Frist of all, some people want to but advertised something just because the theme song advertising on TV has attracted them, or the male or female actor is their favorite star. Second,it is the creative ideas or story inside one advertisement impressed them well, so audience think their products is as well as their advertisement. Last but not least, when one advertisement repeat being shown on television, people's eyes was affected again and again, then there will be one potential impression which went into people's mind, when they some day found this product in supermarket, they will have familiarity with this product, so this is the obvious function of advertisement.
