2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

可适当增加从句的使用；文章衔接手法恰当；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Chinese parents were so attention to their children's study in the past that they didn't allow their children to help them do housework. Their fundamentally demand is that the children study hard, get a good mark and are admitted into famous university.They believe that it is good for the children for the strongly social competition in China and only good mark can ensure that the children's future is bright. Siminaly, they also agreed that if the children can gain a great achievement in society,they will be respected. So they are willing to devote their own time, hobby and interests to providing better consition for their children.