文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章层次较为清晰;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用。
I have a good friend whose name is Zhangyang.She has big eyes and small nose ,a black long hair.she is 15 now,and she is in a student in a middle school.we knew each other for seven years.we often study together at weekends.Zhangyang is very smart and nice ,I like her very much.I hope to keep our friendship forever.