3. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
My dream Everyone may have his own dream.Someone may want to be rich,someone may want to be beautiful,and someone may want to have power.Last monday,we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting.Here are different opinions. I have a dream that to be a teacher.I want to change the stitution of our education.First,i will change the way of teaching.I will use new technology to spreed my students views,let them to be students who have innovation capabilities,and have health mind.They may not all be successful,but they must be the most importantest man or woman that improve our sociaty,and they are the most happiest group.This is my dream. When thinking of these things,we realize that we are full of life and hope.
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