回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
【精析】
此篇作文应为回复邀请的信函。在这类信函中要注意信的格式。时间应该写在右上角,称呼应顶格并首字母大写。正文要写清楚应邀还是拒绝,若拒绝,要写清楚理由,并向邀请人致歉。
作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
June 4th, 2010 Dear Wang LI Thank you for you invite to come to your son's first birthday party,I have seen the lovely baby before and it is worth celebrating for him and your happy family Unfortunate,I will soon return to deal with company events, So not to participate in the birthday party. I am really sorry for my absence. Hope you will have a wonderful party and a good time. Sincere John Smith