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I don't now the grow up was happy or annoyance,i'm have chaos now. maybe in the last time age i feel happy.That i fell happy when my child hood.At that time we're innocent,we're mischievous.we enjoy the everything in the world.But the life every is not smoothly,the grow is painful.Then alway all of a sudden to my beautiful moment.But what's the way to do it again.we're still growing.