2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hello,I'm keyman.I have lived in Foshan of Guangdong province,which is the southern of China.Maybe you are confused what 's the difference between the south of China and the north of China.The climate is so warm,and is better to work on the south of China.I mean you can stay here with me . Ancestor temple is the ancient place of our Foshan.There are so many people here to travel and to worship everyday. The red walls,Which are around Ancestor temple ,are the markable buildings in Foshan.everytime I enter into this gate with my friends,it makes me feel quiet and secret. Someone visits the history museum.Someone visits the place where displays the historical pictures and hero's pictures.your pace will be slow and quiet.