2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

There are many intereasting and beautiful places in Chian. Especial many interest of places in Bweijing, such as Great Wall, the Forbidden city, the Summer Palace...... As for me , I want to bring my foreign friend to the Great Wall in my hometown. As we all know, the Great Wall is the longest wall in Chian, the Great Wall built in the period of the spring and Autumn period and the Warring States period, built in yanwang, with a history of more than 2000 years. The Great Wall today means more than the Great Wall built in Ming Dynasty. It is the East Yalu River, West to inland areas of Gansu Province of Jiayuguan. As the saying goes,'One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero'. So I want to take my friend to the Great Wall to see the grand and beautiful signs.