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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71660
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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There are many interesting and beautiful places in China. Especially there are lots of places of interest in Bweijing, such as Great Wall, the Forbidden city, the Summer Palace...... As for me , I want to take my foreign friend to the Great Wall in my hometown. As we all know, the Great Wall is the longest wall in China, the Great Wall built in the period of the spring and autumn period and the Warring States period, built in Yanwang, with a history of more than 2000 years. The Great Wall today means more than the Great Wall built in Ming Dynasty. It is the East Yalu River, West to inland areas of Gansu Province of Jiayuguan. As the saying goes,'one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero'. So I want to take my friend to the Great Wall to see the grand and beautiful signs.

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