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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71640
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Over 80 percent of the world's city dwellers breathe poor quality air, increasing their risk of lung cancer and other life-threatening diseases, a new World Health Organization (WHO) report warned last Thursday.Urban residents in poor countries are by far the worst affected, the WHO said, noting that nearly every city (98 percent) in low- and middle-income countries has air which fails to meet the UN body's standards. That number falls to 56 percent of cities in wealthier countries.

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