作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;应增加句子的多样性,注意个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
I am so glad to receive you letter. You want to know what i like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you. First, I want to learn swimming. I admire the person who can swim freely in the water, and it's cool to swim in the summer. Second, I will go to bookstore buy some interesting book. At last, watching TV is my most favorite thing. I like to watch TV series about love.
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