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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分51.0分
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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;建议平时练习中,多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

用户练习作文:

usually judge people by outward appearance is very bad thing.A one person polite to other one,that one is do't care,but because of your action and judge you.And someone get a point,other people think he is a learned .I must be say that have a point.The fast impression with people profound is true.You must be friendly to everybody,but sometime also want to learn the say no.We're still think have a beautiful world,Also live up to faculty of expect .

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