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If a foreign friend come to our hometown, I am glad to introduce the interesting place in Nantong to him or her. The interesting places in Nantong are the Museum , the People's Park and the wolf hill. These three places are famous in Nantong, and everyone in Nantong is known,and they have the character of the Nantong. Museum has the history of the Nantong's developement.There are many native beautiful landscapes and many enthusiasmtic persons in there.Some enjoys their leisure time, some takes their children to play. Foreign friends must be very interesting if we take them to there.There are no wolfves in wolf hill. It is a famous religion resort in China. Chinese people is hospitable,and Nantong's is no exception. We must entertain these friends well.
