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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章组织结构良好;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Now as the technology of the cyber is much developed, we are convenient to communicate. The picture give me impressive impact that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. Internet is developed so much that our living can stay in the house without going out for eating and clothing .Some person maybe do their works,but the majorities are addict on playing games.They stay in their room not to speak with their parents who liveing with them.Only on internet do they communicate with them .The cyberplace offer us many convenience,but it can increase our laziness,we are lazy to shopping to the store,we are lazy to communicate with our friends face to face,we are lazy to eating to the testautant. We can utilize the developed internet for our living, some quantity outdoors activeties are essential.

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