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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中衔接词丰富;文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误。

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Give an abrupt conculsion after hearing and visioning is not wise. it is said perception is reality ,but some sometimes the outside perception make us concealed. everyone must have the experience of watching TV play , a lot of unnessary misunderstanding happen ,lots of troubles following this misundertanding,and some many episodes induced by it too and we often curse the gun is so stupied.but in the daily life we frequently play as the stupied gun in TV show. Hearing and vision not alway represent the reality or truth. you nerver know the background of an event or what happened in last monent by one glaze or hear. We all familar with volient online. some editors like to report piece of a whole story to conversation to change the original logical or plot. The reader may fall into the trap and give some unfair comments to the hero in the story. We all hate the unhonst editor,beacuse he make us to be an mean person . but meanwhile, i think we should reflect ourselves on the effects. we should be more intelligent when we face the life of other or us.

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