小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习。

I have a good friend, her name is Su. She is a beautiful girl with long black hair and two large black eyes. She has an oval-shaped face and she is fair complexion that glows with a hint of pink. She has an thin lips. She is very good at singing, She likes reading books, play computer games, and does sports. She is a accommodating girl ,she often help us, we all like her very much.