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When it comes to save money in our daily life. Everyone has his own idea about it. Some people saving money is a good habit which can provide us with security. While the others think money should be used for today’s joy rather than tomorrow’s living. As for me, I would like to save money for my better life. For one thing, saving money is good for us to improve our living standard. Our life need money, which support us to realize dreams. For example, we can buy a comfortable house for family, get a perfect car for travel, and enjoy life with friends. Obviously, all those dreams need a lot money so that saving money is the effective way to improve our living standard. For anther thing, saving money is a preparation for a secured life. We may not avoid sufferings in life, but it’s better to have money when we are in trouble. Consider a case of someone who gets illness, what can he do for life without money? At that time, he must know the importance of saving money, which can give he a cure in hospital, and restore his health, even his life. Just as the saying goes: saving for a rainy day. As is discussed above, Saving money can benefits us a lot in many aspects. We should cultivate a good habit of saving money which will provide us with security and better life.
