文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;全文结构较为严谨;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。
I'm is a student ,live in shanghai and go school now.I like this city,though time is evil of city whit me.Even so i still love her.yes,i call her,because this city have like women exquisite. She with international to line.Many move succeed in the city.If you failed in this city,don't worry,she will pity you.everything there are one moment again.In this way ,i will take my friend to see Film Museum, because there is a history of the development of China's most complete.