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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写做的很棒，高级词汇可适量增加；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用。
What is the meaning of "save money" for you? Generally, for most of us ,saving money mean cost less money to get more value. it is undoubted . But when you are induced by the sale or group-buy activities, does it means you are saving money?as my think ,the answer is definitely NO. We all have the experience of shopping in the Mall and across with some stuff discount. Of course as a student,my first reaction is considering about if it is worth and could be used in my life. But most of time , I am used to search for some excuses to support me to buy it home. Saving money is one of the hefty excuses to convince me. However, after few hours or days , i began to regret for my roughly decision. Because I found the stuff which was lied in the corner with ashes was not as useful as I thought primary. It was totally wasting instead of saving. Therefore I found the logic of shopping is really important, the correct order of shopping is thinking before buying .In another word, you should list what you need before go shopping rather than view the goods without any goals. In summary, we should think clearly before shopping and save you money in the right way!
