2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Shopping on the internet is popular at present. Goods are sent to our homes by express without going out to the market after our press on the key of the computer. There are many benfits in this way gain the manchdise .First, it is quickly to finish shopping ,not to take much time,not to find one market after the other . Only searching goods or store what you want on the internet .Second,We can select the best from the sorts of the goods considering price,quaility etc. Although the shopping is so good,it is dificient yet. We don't see the goods face to face,sometimes the quanlity of the goods is much different from the picture on the computer. Sometimes money in our accounts risks much on the internet by the attacking of the hacker. I think shopping on the internet is good,I like it. As the defense and protection of the trade company or goverment, we can buy at our ease.